Thursday 12 April 2018

Haiku

In Room five we have been writing using Haiku. A Haiku is a traditional Japanese way of making a poem. If you want to make one for yourself you can see it by clicking on this link: Haiku.
The rules to making a Haiku is that you have to have five syllables on the first line and 7 on the next line then 5 again and you can't have any more than that. Here is mine.


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4 comments:

  1. Unknown12 April 2018 at 17:57

    HI Blake, your haiku gives a neat picture of autumn, and I especially like your last line which hints at cold weather. Well done!

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  2. Unknown13 April 2018 at 07:53

    Thanks for the comment Mrs Idle.

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  3. Unknown13 April 2018 at 10:24

    Hi Blake, Deakyn here from Awahono School. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I would love to see more poems on your blog. Will you be able to post some more? I checked your poem over at least five times and didn't spot any mistakes. I also counted the syllables in each one and didn't spot a single thing that was wrong. I hope you will be able to visit my blog too.
    Kind Regards
    Deakyn

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  4. Unknown13 April 2018 at 10:36

    Hey Deakyn thanks for the kind, positive, thoughtful comment. I will be sure to comment on your blog.

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