We were given a task to do during the holidays which was to find a descriptive sentence in a book that we read in the holidays. I read Diary Of a Wimpy Kid Old School here is the sentence I found.
Hi Blake, your sentence describes a problem for the characters in the story; does the sentence tell or show? How do you think the author could have described what was happening to the water as the characters carried it to give the reader a better picture? Your illustration shows the problem and how the characters felt very clearly, and your drawing is very eye-catching - well done. Mrs Idle
Hi there, my name is Cassie and I am a student in room Manukau at waikowhai primary School. I really like the way you blogged about Diary of a wimpy kid. It made me think of the time I when I was reading the same book as you and my brother rip the book . Have you thought about blogging about your family and your friends. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://http://wpscassiep.blogspot.co.nz/.
Hi Blake, your sentence describes a problem for the characters in the story; does the sentence tell or show? How do you think the author could have described what was happening to the water as the characters carried it to give the reader a better picture?
ReplyDeleteYour illustration shows the problem and how the characters felt very clearly, and your drawing is very eye-catching - well done.
Mrs Idle
Hi there, my name is Cassie and I am a student in room Manukau at waikowhai primary School. I really like the way you blogged about Diary of a wimpy kid. It made me think of the time I when I was reading the same book as you and my brother rip the book . Have you thought about blogging about your family and your friends. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://http://wpscassiep.blogspot.co.nz/.
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