Mickey Mouse mounted a motorbike
and rode to Mcdonalds.
He ordered a Big Mac, he munched and crunched
until it was time to go get his moustache shaved.
While he was marching.
He was on his phone
playing monster legends.
He wasn’t looking at the road
and marched into a mysterious maze.
The maze had a sign on the side of it
that said "mushrooms caution if eaten may cause deadly side effects
you have been warned!"
It had mushrooms on it and a magpie guarded it.
The mushrooms were so called magical.
Mickey Mouse moved into the maze
and straight away
found a mushroom.
He took it
and ran out of the maze to his mansion.
"This is going to be marvellous!" murmured Mickey Mouse.
He cooked the mushroom and swallowed it whole.
He turned into a manikin.
"Macaroni and cheese!" screamed
Mickey Mouse.
He took a mountain bike
and a mug.
He was becoming a maniac motoring towards town.
The End
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