Monday, 21 December 2020

summer learning journey haiku

 This is a haiku for summer learning journey it has to be about summer so i have made it about a new zealand summer





5 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Blake,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really enjoyed this activity as I love poetry and writing Haikus for my friends, I usually write a Haiku in their birthday cards!

    I thought your haiku summed up a New Zealand summer pretty well, hot chips, lollies and ice cream at the beach sounds like the best kind of summer day. I like that you used a background that relates to your haiku as well.

    I found your post a little hard to read as the words were so little so maybe next time you could make the text larger, other than that you did a great job!

    Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Blake. Cool blog post I take it that you got inspirerd from the christmas carrols we did this year at school.:)
    Any way maby next time you could make the Haiku a bit bigger because it is quite small.

    Cheers

    Lochie

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. they are meant to be small its 5 syallbes 7 syallbes 5 syallbes thats what a haiku is

      Delete
  3. Inspired by the kiwi Jingle Bells I see. Good job mate, great post.

    Ka Pai

    -Alex

    ReplyDelete
  4. Kia ora Blake,

    Fiona here from the SLJ team. I hope you are having a great time over the summer holidays! I really like your haiku poem - especially because I love hot chips on the beach... yum!

    Have you seen all the fun recent SLJ activities? You can check them out here

    I think my favourite activities from last week were the ‘Building a Dam’ and the ‘Secret Code’ tasks. Yesterday Nanogirl posted another awesome activity, all about building supercolumns!

    Let me know which activities you enjoy!

    Mā te wā,

    Fiona

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.