Two weeks ago Room five had a Camp at Hanmer Springs. It was very exciting. We did all sorts of things such as tree climbing and mountain biking. It was a three day camp. In this slideshow I will show you everything we did. I hope you have a great day.
Hi Blake
ReplyDeleteYour slideshow is very appealing because of the contrasting highlight and font, and the size of font you've chosen. Also, you have mixed up your writing with plenty of pictures. I also like how you have made your headings come up one at a time - it's very effective.
Hi Blake, It's Deakyn from Awahono School. I really like your camp slide show and how it was at camp. Maybe next time you could put what was happening in the picture, so people understand. You put some really good photos in. How long did it take you to make the slideshow? Next time you could also say how you felt when you were doing each activity.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards Deakyn
Wow Blake, what a great job you did with your Hanmer slideshow, you went into a lot of detail about your time there, right down to what you had in your sandwiches. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs Horner for the kind, helpful comment.
ReplyDeleteBlake I like your Hanmer Springs slideshow but some of your titles are repeated a bit too much. maybe next time you could make just one?
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