This term I had to do a reading profile but this time I did it a little differently... I worked with Jake. The green slides are Jake's and the orange slides are mine. Here it is.
Hey Blake it's your pal Deakyn here from Awahono School. I really liked your's and Jake's term 4 reading profile. One thing Jake could do was check his spelling and another mistake I saw was on slide 7 you said I was written by Andy Griffithes and on the same slide you wrote "Storey" instead of "story" so that's a few mistakes. But other than those two mistakes nothing else was to bad. Do you think you will finish your reading goals this term? Come check out my blog :P Kind Regards Deakyn
Hi there Blake, my name is Rio from Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you highlighted the words of what you were saying and what Jake was saying. I also liked how you added animations on your slides to one another and made them stand out. Have you thought about maybe making it a bit brighter because it was a bit dark? If you would like to see my blog: click here
Hi there Blake,my name is Emelio from Waikowhai Primary School.I liked how you highlighted the writing to show who wrote what.Next time you could add some pictures of the author.If you want you can come and check out my bog at http://wpsemeliot.blogspot.com/2017/03/welcome.html#comment-form
Hi my name is William from Waikowhai Primary School. I like those goals they sound very good. I think you could put some photos of the book and the author. I think that you could maybe put some writing in the bottom to say what books they have done and look like. If you want to see my blog. here the link: http://wpswilliamg.blogspot.co.nz/
Hey Blake it's your pal Deakyn here from Awahono School. I really liked your's and Jake's term 4 reading profile. One thing Jake could do was check his spelling and another mistake I saw was on slide 7 you said I was written by Andy Griffithes and on the same slide you wrote "Storey" instead of "story" so that's a few mistakes. But other than those two mistakes nothing else was to bad. Do you think you will finish your reading goals this term? Come check out my blog :P
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Deakyn
Hey Deakyn thanks for the comment. I will ask Jake to fix up those mistakes and then things will be all good.
Delete-Blake :D
Hi there Blake, my name is Rio from Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you highlighted the words of what you were saying and what Jake was saying. I also liked how you added animations on your slides to one another and made them stand out.
Have you thought about maybe making it a bit brighter because it was a bit dark?
If you would like to see my blog: click here
Hi there Blake,my name is Emelio from Waikowhai Primary School.I liked how you highlighted the writing to show who wrote what.Next time you could add some pictures of the author.If you want you can come and check out my bog at http://wpsemeliot.blogspot.com/2017/03/welcome.html#comment-form
ReplyDeleteHi my name is William from Waikowhai Primary School. I like those goals they sound very good. I think you could put some photos of the book and the author. I think that you could maybe put some writing in the bottom to say what books they have done and look like. If you want to see my blog. here the link: http://wpswilliamg.blogspot.co.nz/
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